Qustions Where was the biggest tornado recorded?
How many cars have been crushed in a tornado?
How big was a tornado? Where was one of the biggest tornado?
Where was the biggest storm recorded?
Why do you have to shut motorway in a event of strong snowstorms?
What is the biggest light that arrived in New Zealand?
Where was the one of the biggest Lighting?
Where was the largest hurricane recorded?
How many people get killed in the largest hurricane?
Where was the biggest Tsunami?
How big was the Tsunami?
How high was one of the biggest floods?
What is a cyclones?
How big was the biggest cyclone in New Zealand?
Where was the last cyclone?
Tornado When you see leaves spinning round and round in the breeze, you are witnessing a miniature whirlwind. A similar thing happens on dusty
land and in the summer little whirlwinds pick up the dry dust and spin it around and upwards into a spiralling column called a dust devil, which can climb up to 300m high dust devil do little damage, but another kind of whirling wind is one of the most destructive forces in
nature. It is the Tornados are born in violent thunderstorms. They form when a funnel-shaped column of whirling air forms beneath a thundercloud and descends to the ground.As it nears the ground, it picks up dust and debris.
The Tornado is such u big thing it could destroy millions of houses,company buildings and stuff like that. It's extremly powerful Tornado's give you a warning like a gigantic grey cloud come and
Lighting When you see leaves spinning round and round in the breeze, you are witnessing a miniature whirlwind. A similar thing happens on dusty
land and in the summer little whirlwinds pick up the dry dust and spin it around and upwards into a spiralling column called a dust devil, which can climb up to 300m high dust devil do little damage, but another kind of whirling wind is one of the most destructive forces in
nature. It is the Tornados are born in violent thunderstorms. They form when a funnel-shaped column of whirling air forms beneath a thundercloud and descends to the ground.As it nears the ground, it picks up dust and debris. Cyclones The whirling storms we call Tornados are extremely powerful, but they are only a few hundred meters across and travel only a few kilometers. Much larger and more destructive are great whirling storms called tropical cyclones. They form over the oceans of tropical
regions. Gradually, they grow into great spirals of dense clouds as much as 500km across, with winds whirling round a speeds up to
300km/h. Tropical cyclones that form north of the Equator and in the oceans around USA are called hurricanes. They are born in the warm waters of the Alantic and East Pacific oceans and often affect the USA and the Caribbean.
Cyclones can destroy millions of building and homes.That lot's of people can't go anywhere beacuse here homes where destored.And there might not any family that could stay with.
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Where was the biggest tornado recorded?
How many cars have been crushed in a tornado?
How big was a tornado?
Where was one of the biggest tornado?
Where was the biggest storm recorded?
Why do you have to shut motorway in a event of strong snowstorms?
What is the biggest light that arrived in New Zealand?
Where was the one of the biggest Lighting?
Where was the largest hurricane recorded?
How many people get killed in the largest hurricane?
Where was the biggest Tsunami?
How big was the Tsunami?
How high was one of the biggest floods?
What is a cyclones?
How big was the biggest cyclone in New Zealand?
Where was the last cyclone?
Tornado
When you see leaves spinning round and round in the breeze, you are witnessing a miniature whirlwind. A similar thing happens on dusty
land and in the summer little whirlwinds pick up the dry dust and spin it around and upwards into a spiralling column called a dust devil, which can climb up to 300m high dust devil do little damage, but another kind of whirling wind is one of the most destructive forces in
nature. It is the Tornados are born in violent thunderstorms. They form when a funnel-shaped column of whirling air forms beneath a thundercloud and descends to the ground.As it nears the ground, it picks up dust and debris.
The Tornado is such u big thing it could destroy millions of houses,company buildings and stuff like that. It's extremly powerful Tornado's give you a warning like a gigantic grey cloud come and
Lighting
When you see leaves spinning round and round in the breeze, you are witnessing a miniature whirlwind. A similar thing happens on dusty
land and in the summer little whirlwinds pick up the dry dust and spin it around and upwards into a spiralling column called a dust devil, which can climb up to 300m high dust devil do little damage, but another kind of whirling wind is one of the most destructive forces in
nature. It is the Tornados are born in violent thunderstorms. They form when a funnel-shaped column of whirling air forms beneath a thundercloud and descends to the ground.As it nears the ground, it picks up dust and debris.
Cyclones
The whirling storms we call Tornados are extremely powerful, but they are only a few hundred meters across and travel only a few kilometers. Much larger and more destructive are great whirling storms called tropical cyclones. They form over the oceans of tropical
regions. Gradually, they grow into great spirals of dense clouds as much as 500km across, with winds whirling round a speeds up to
300km/h. Tropical cyclones that form north of the Equator and in the oceans around USA are called hurricanes. They are born in the warm waters of the Alantic and East Pacific oceans and often affect the USA and the Caribbean.
Cyclones can destroy millions of building and homes.That lot's of people can't go anywhere beacuse here homes where destored.And there might not any family that could stay with.
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Teacher Comment: You have chosen a great topic to write about Shannon but your information report is not finished. It is important that you keep your focus in class and work to deadlines. If you need clarification, you need to come and see me.